## [FF][RST] The Waves Arisen [Ch.4]

* Author: u/Wertifloke *
* URL: https://wertifloke.wordpress.com/2015/01/28/the-waves-arisen-chapter-4
* Score: 18

* Created: 2015-01-28T23:27:34

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### Comments:

> **u/Nevereatcars** [+3]  *The Greatest Is Behind* (23 hours later)
> 
> Who has a higher bounty than Kakashi? Sarutobi, Jiraiya, maaaybe Tsunade (if she even counts as a leaf shinobi), but that's only 3? People like Nara Shikaku (Jonin Commander) and Hyuuga Hiashi, but I'd still be missing one somewhere?

>> **u/Anderkent** [+2]  (23 hours later)
>> 
>> Could just be an entry for "leaf's jinchuuriki". Most other names I can come up with (Danzo, Asuma, etc) don't really fit very well.

> **u/rumblestiltsken** [+2]  (7 hours later)
> 
> I liked this chapter.
> 
> You are really changing a lot of the mechanics from canon, which I am finding a bit hard to keep track of, but as long as I roll with the changes as they are relevant it isn't too jarring.

> **u/Anderkent** [+2]  (20 hours later)
> 
> Liked this chapter more than the previous ones. Kakashi is surprisingly reasonable

> **u/4t0m** [+2]  *Chaos Legion* (2 days later)
> 
> I really like how the experience of using the Sharingan is described in this fic.  Is that canon/fanon/your own description?

>> **u/Wertifloke** [+1]  (3 days later)
>> 
>> The canonical sharingan just seems to do whatever the author wanted at the time. I doubt I'm the first to do it this way, though.

> **u/Kodix** [+3]  (8 hours later)
> 
> Neat. Gotta like Shadow Clone abuse.

> **u/Jello_Raptor** [+2]  *The Last Tool User* (17 hours later)
> 
> Can you please cancel your prefixes out? For some reason "A few hundred-thousand millichakra" annoys me immensely. "A few hundred chakra" would be much nicer.

>> **u/daydev** [+5]  (18 hours later)
>> 
>> Another opinion: I don't mind. 
>> 
>> And just "chakra" doesn't even make much sence when talking about *parts* of chakra. 
>> 
>> Also, I think the author is going to mostly stick to abbreviation "mc" now that it's established.

>>> **u/Jello_Raptor** [+1]  *The Last Tool User* (20 hours later)
>>> 
>>> this might be a bit silly, but "Chakra + Thaum = Chaum"?
>>> 
>>> Alternately, just use joules or something.

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