## [FF] [WIP] [RT] A Rational Character in the Star Wars Universe, Updated

* Author: u/None *
* URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10740793/1/A-Voice-Across-the-Void
* Score: 42

* Created: 2015-07-13T18:50:12

### Post:

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### Comments:

> **u/INeedAUsernameToo** [+3]  (3 hours later)
> 
> This chapter felt very bitter-sweet. One last dance, before the storm.

> **u/recursiveAI** [+3]  (4 hours later)
> 
> Very nice. Really enjoying it so far (finished chapter 3)

> **u/Jace_MacLeod** [+2]  (15 hours later)
> 
> This story seems promising. Out of curiosity, is Nerra based loosely on Kreia from KOTOR II? They both have white hair, brown robes, an affinity for force sight, and a philosophy of viewing the light and dark sides of the Force as two parts of a greater whole. If Nerra starts talking in cryptic, manipulative half-truths, I'm calling shenanigans.

>> **u/abcd_z** [+3]  (5 months later)
>> 
>> Nerra backwards is Arren.  As in, "[Arren Kae](http://lparchive.org/Knights-of-the-Old-Republic-II/Update%2058/)".  ;)

>> **u/None** [+2]  (22 hours later)
>> 
>> More than loosely :)

> **u/trifith** [+1]  *Man plans, god laughs. Like the ant and the grasshopper.* (43 minutes later)
> 
> Ch 1: "his performance seemed to be deteriorate with" should be "his performance seemed to be deteriorating with"
> 
> Ch 4: " I take it things did not go well Gil?" should be "I take it things did not go well for Gil?"

>> **u/2-4601** [+1]  (an hour later)
>> 
>> In addition:
>> 
>> >why put emphasize that one?
>> 
>> -> Why emphasise that one?

>>> **u/None** [+1]  (7 hours later)
>>> 
>>> Thanks, all. Will fix these when I post the next chapter.

> **u/Sailor_Vulcan** [+1]  *Champion of Justice and Reason* (5 hours later)
> 
> AWESOME!

> **u/whywhisperwhy** [+1]  (6 hours later)
> 
> Very much enjoying this, it's already better than a lot of the EU books imo.... Thanks for bringing a little SW back.

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