## [RT] New Chapter: Juncture 1.8

* Author: u/AHatfulOfBomb *
* URL: http://junctureserial.blogspot.com/2015/09/juncture-18.html
* Score: 8

* Created: 2015-09-24T14:14:57

### Post:

[Link to content](http://junctureserial.blogspot.com/2015/09/juncture-18.html)

### Comments:

> **u/Kodix** [+2]  (4 hours later)
> 
> This may benefit from longer chapters at longer intervals. We're 8 chapters in and it feels to me as if the plot barely advanced over where it started in the first chapter. 
> 
> I'm still enjoying the story, though, and I like the premise.

>> **u/AHatfulOfBomb** [+1]  (5 hours later)
>> 
>> Hey, thanks for the comment.
>> 
>> I know this chapter wasn't that great, I was trying to make the first arc longer, which wasn't necessarily a smart move. But the pace is set to speed up quite a bit in the next few chapters.

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