## [RT][FF] Shears, Chapter 2 (r!MLP)

* Author: u/Calamitizer  *Shears**
* URL: http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/868341
* Score: 17

* Created: 2015-11-20T01:22:17

### Post:

[Link to content](http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/868341)

### Comments:

> **u/Transfuturist** [+4]  *Carthago delenda est.* (21 minutes later)
> 
> I love your characterization of Twilight so far. Nothing overtly wrong except social anxiety, and possibly something more.
> 
> [](#s "It would be pretty ironic for pony fanfiction to have a character with real autism.")
> 
> I want moar. You have a lot of tiny discrepancies that make me very curious. Perhaps something to emulate in my own practice.

> **u/daydev** [+3]  (9 hours later)
> 
> I think you did a nice job *showing, not telling* that Twilight does not care *at all* about the casual conversation.

> **u/Calamitizer** [+2]  *Shears* (a minute later)
> 
> The story begins [here](http://www.fimfiction.net/story/300693/1/shears/bridges-1).
> 
> Basic info is [here](https://www.reddit.com/r/rational/comments/3te0fy/rtff_shears_chapter_1_rmlp/cx5d65r).
> 
> Thanks for reading (or just clicking)!

> **u/None** [+2]  (9 hours later)
> 
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>> **u/Calamitizer** [+1]  *Shears* (12 hours later)
>> 
>> The idea is that the sun stayed out longer than normal, but I realize now how ambiguous that phrasing is. Thanks!

>>> **u/None** [+1]  (21 hours later)
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