## [WIP] The New Year's Massacre, Part II. * Author: u/None * * URL: * Score: 10 * Created: 2017-06-12T11:45:00 ### Post: [deleted] ### Comments: > **u/narfanator** [+1] (20 hours later) > > I like the story, but the voice changes from an impartial narrative to a person on the ground, and it's a little weird. It might be as a simple as a change between article (the drones did...) and pronouns (I watched the drones as they....) ---