## [RT][WIP] Worth the Candle, Ch 6

* Author: u/cthulhuraejepsen  *Fruit flies like a banana**
* URL: http://archiveofourown.org/works/11478249/chapters/25980909
* Score: 26

* Created: 2017-07-21T13:25:28

### Post:

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### Comments:

> **u/cthulhuraejepsen** [+12]  *Fruit flies like a banana* (7 minutes later)
> 
> > It's a self-insert litRPG portal fantasy, loosely based on my personal experience of falling into a portal to another world and discovering that I had a character sheet attached to my soul.
> 
> I've been updating this at a pretty steady clip but don't want to spam this subreddit, so will probably post here once a week in order to keep from annoying people by having lots of chapters.
> 
> Don't forget to like, comment, share, and subscribe!

>> **u/Laborbuch** [+6]  (17 hours later)
>> 
>> > Don't forget to like, comment, share, and subscribe!
>> 
>> You forgot the most crucial request: the firstborn’s soul for a steady update rate. Something needs to push the soul cycle to higher speeds after all.

> **u/Kodix** [+8]  (18 hours later)
> 
> I really, really like this. The first chapter was decent when you posted it, but now that there's a fair chunk of writing to bite into, I know enough to judge - and I think the story's excellent.
> 
> Thanks for sharing it with us!

> **u/Krozart** [+3]  (3 days later)
> 
> Awesome, I've just binged read this and I was a surprised by how much I like this. I will definitely be following this. I am looking forward to the next chapter!

> **u/edqu-** [+2]  (4 days later)
> 
> Mmm, nice.
> 
> I don't know how many other people there are like me but I skipped every single segment discussing your old life and your dnd group, and will probably continue to skip them. I hope they continue to be plot irrelevant.
> 
> Also, the coterie minions seem way too much like meaningless NPC goon automata. I'm guessing you didn't intend that, since you don't comment on it in-universe.
> 
> But really those are mostly nitpicks, everything else was pleasantly excellent and I'm really looking forward to reading more!

>> **u/Calsem** [+5]  (a month later)
>> 
>> Personally, I liked the backstory segments.  A lot of rational fics lack emotion and the backstory segments help fully develop the character.

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