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u/alexanderwales [+2] Time flies like an arrow (21 hours later)

That comment section is ... well, what happens when two sides of an argument both think that they are clearly right about something, complicated by the fact that a lot of people are talking at cross-purposes, or about different things.

u/sam512 [+8] (a day later)

Nobody mentioned whether they enjoyed the fight :(

u/alexanderwales [+3] Time flies like an arrow (a day later)

Well I liked the fight. I think that I like all of the fights you write, actually. There's a part of Fine Structure that I often find myself pointing to and saying, "There, that is exactly how a superhero fight scene should be written."

u/pedanterrific [+3] (2 days later)

Which part, out of curiosity?

u/AmeteurOpinions [+4] Finally, everyone was working together. (2 days later)

Probably this one.

u/alexanderwales [+4] Time flies like an arrow (2 days later)

Yup, that's the one!

u/AmeteurOpinions [+2] Finally, everyone was working together. (a day later)

The fight confused me at first because I had thought that The Glass Man was sort of like a "Incarnated Ra" built out of thin air like that mech created by Abstract Weapon all those chapters ago. You did a good job of establishing its dominance when it first nicked the Bridge from Laura.

But then in this fight it turns out to be a human, which is a step down in power that kinda threw me off at first. Hope that makes sense.

u/VorpalAuroch [+2] Life before Death (20 hours later)

Looking at the comment thread and the author's responses, it's interesting how much The Glass Man comes off as a Strawman with a Point.

u/JosephLeee [+2] (2 days later)

One thing that confuses me is that even though the listening post is destroyed, the characters are still casting magic.

u/AmeteurOpinions [+2] Finally, everyone was working together. (2 days later)

The listening post doesn't control magic, it just lets the Wheel Group have their admin privileges. Magic is run from that other complex where Laura found the Bridge.