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Following the Phoenix Chapter 107: The Muggle War, Pt 5
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Author: u/EriktheRed *
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URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10636246/27/Following-the-Phoenix
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Score: 18
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Created: 2014-12-07T00:17:21
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u/darkhindu [+3] (7 hours later)
Any reviews to this? I've read MoR up to the current chapter, how's this for a read?
u/blanktextbox [+12] (7 hours later)
It opened with a good deal of promise and has mostly done well. In my opinion there are times it struggles, usually in the form of somewhat implausible rushed transitions, but I definitely feel the good outweighs the bad and continue to enjoy reading it.
u/darkhindu [+2] (7 hours later)
I'll give it the ol' college try. Thanks bro.
u/MoralRelativity [+1] (8 hours later)
It's certainly worth the time invested.
u/MoralRelativity [+2] (8 hours later)
This aligns very much with my views too. I give your review 5 stars.
u/None [+3] (12 hours later)
I find the comment at the end interesting. While this kind of full-powers-vested negotiation is terrible for back-door trade agreements, it would have been damn nice for the negotiators to have when actually trying to end long-running wars. I can't help but think that the Israeli-Arab conflict could have been over for 6 years now...
u/Chooquaeno [+3] (22 hours later)
plenipotentiary
u/RMcD94 [+0] (a day later)
What kind of robots are going to enter the Ministry in 1990?
u/scruiser [+5] CYOA (a day later)
Remote controlled vehicle mounted with a video camera, auto turret, and a fail-deadly nuclear weapon.