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A More Perfect Union Chapter 1: Vault Tech, a fallout fanfic
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Author: u/traverseda With dread but cautious optimism*
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URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11141625/1/A-More-Perfect-Union
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Score: 8
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Created: 2016-08-22T15:17:28
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u/callmebrotherg [+5] now posting as /u/callmesalticidae (2 hours later)
The way in which they hit on the name "Bayesian Conspiracy" is a little contrived and took me out of the story. I'm still interested in seeing where this is going to be taken, though, so I'm going to bookmark the fic and read the other chapters later on.
u/Liberticus [+2] (18 hours later)
As Dwood15 pointed out the Fallout world doesn't make a lot of sense. Neither does the plot in Fallout 3 so I hope you've changed it to make sense. Those are the things which worry me at the moment. Otherwise this is a nice first chapter, I like it.
u/Dwood15 [+1] (7 hours later)
The Fallout world is so irrational it's difficult to believe humanity is still around. Ill wait a few chapters to take out judgement on this fan fic but it does annoy me about the games in general.