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[RST] Naruto: The Need to Become Stronger, Chapter 4
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Author: u/Sophronius The Need to Become Stronger*
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URL: https://needtobecomestronger.wordpress.com/2016/11/02/chapter-5/
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Score: 9
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Created: 2016-11-02T22:39:13
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u/Red_Navy [+5] (4 hours later)
That capture scene really captured a certain aesthetic, albeit not naruto per say but very ninja-y. +5 points for style
u/Sophronius [+1] The Need to Become Stronger (3 minutes later)
This chapter concludes the first half of act 1. I'm very curious to hear how you all liked it so far!
The PDF and Epub versions are available here: https://www.mediafire.com/folder/og9fdufawqfj7/NTBS
The story is now also available on fanfiction.net: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12213213/1/The-Need-to-Become-Stronger
u/erasels [+1] (7 hours later)
Is the ffnet version lagging behind on updates?
u/Sophronius [+1] The Need to Become Stronger (19 hours later)
Yes, but I'm posting a new chapter there every day, so it should catch up soon enough.
u/hoja_nasredin [+1] Dai-Gurren Brigade (a day later)
I like this.
u/kaukamieli [+1] (9 days later)
I'd love it if you had "previous" and "next" on top of the text, so I can see it without scrolling. Now I have to search for it, scrolling all the way to the end.
u/tokol [+1] The Greater Good (13 days later)
Uhm,” said Naruto. “I don’t think so. I mean, the Shadow Clone technique is hard to learn because...
Uhm,” -> “Uhm,”
Huge, and with a black overcoat that made him even larger, he wore a grey uniform and a black cap on a bold head.
bold -> bald