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[RT][FF][HF] Naruto. The Need to Become Stronger, Chapter 12: To Become Stronger
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Author: u/Sophronius The Need to Become Stronger*
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URL: https://needtobecomestronger.wordpress.com/2017/01/30/chapter-12/
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Score: 25
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Created: 2017-01-30T16:57:37
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u/Sophronius [+5] The Need to Become Stronger (a minute later)
Please note that I've changed Tsunami back her original name as the change was tripping some people up. I hope this doesn't cause more confusion.
Enjoy the chapter, everyone!
u/eaglejarl [+3] (21 hours later)
What had you named her before, and why did you change it?
u/Sophronius [+1] The Need to Become Stronger (a day later)
Terumi. I changed it because 'Tsunami' was a silly name, and it was driving my beta reader nuts.
u/Overmind_Slab [+3] (5 hours later)
Thanks.
u/Mraedis [+2] (a day later)
I like the writing style, but there's not all that much being done rationally, it's mostly a retelling of Naruto.