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[NSFW][RT][HF] Magical Creatures ch. III.3: Awesome Orgy Thing
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Author: u/Soren_Tycho Clothing-optional Spacetime*
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Score: 10
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Created: 2017-06-02T09:11:31
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u/eternal-potato [+3] he who vegetates (a day later)
While I have scrolled through most of the fucking, I must say that the chapter has the best title. The Thing strikes just the right balance of erotic and horrifying for me.
u/Soren_Tycho [+1] Clothing-optional Spacetime (3 minutes later)
Newspost: http://sadehall.tumblr.com/post/161347503495/iii3-awesome-orgy-thing
For those thinking "not ratfic enough", check back in a couple of chapters when we start getting into the theory-of-mind stuff.
u/None [+6] (a day later)
Ok, you know what? Removed. Sorry. Two grounds here:
No obvious rationality or rational content.
Very difficult to read.
It's not exactly good writing, or good rational writing, to make me read from the first-person perspective of extremely sexually aroused characters who aren't going to give me any description of what their lives and their worlds are, what they look like, what their goals are (besides the sex), etc.
u/Tenoke [+4] Even the fuckin' trees walked in those movies (a month later)
I find this a very sad use of censorship.
u/None [+2] (a month later)
Well sorry, but fiction needs to be comprehensible.
u/Tenoke [+0] Even the fuckin' trees walked in those movies (a month later)
I guess we are forgetting that there is plenty of stuff posted here that 'doesnt fit too well', and doesn't get much love but doesn't get removed either (I've personally posted worse). Or that we have the upvote system to judge which fiction is 'comprehensible'.
Additionally, after seeing your other comments, I'd put a very high probability that you were very biased against the work because of the heavy NSFW content, and would likely not done the same otherwise.
u/None [+2] (a month later)
Additionally, after seeing your other comments, I'd put a very high probability that you were very biased against the work because of the heavy NSFW content, and would likely not done the same otherwise.
Look, if it was sexual, but comprehensible, fine. If I know there's sex going on, but don't even know what body plans or sexual organs it involves, there's a problem.
u/Escapement [+3] Ankh-Morpork City Watch (3 hours later)
check back in a couple of chapters when we start getting into the theory-of-mind stuff.
Your table of contents lists all of the third major division of this story as "III: Chapter One." So by "a couple of chapters" do you mean "a couple of eight-segment things" - such that we might get to the theory of mind stuff sometime in late September / early October, and after another ~200k words (taking your most recent chapter length as typical)?
u/Soren_Tycho [+3] Clothing-optional Spacetime (8 hours later)
Sorry, that is kind of confusing. I'm referring to the 10k-word smaller segments, and the present section title is a metafictional reference. So think more like a month or so.
u/PeridexisErrant [+8] put aside fear for courage, and death for life (3 hours later)
For those thinking "not ratfic enough", check back in a couple of chapters when we start getting into the theory-of-mind stuff.
Maybe ease up on posting until then?
u/Soren_Tycho [+5] Clothing-optional Spacetime (8 hours later)
If the score of this comment or a (more) direct imperative from a mod indicates so, I will.
u/PeridexisErrant [+8] put aside fear for courage, and death for life (15 hours later)
The official guideline is to post your own content at most weekly; personally I feel it's better to error on the side of letting others post it for you.
That's me as a member of the community though, not as a mod, so use your own judgement.
u/Kishoto [+1] (16 hours later)
This is definitely just my opinion but I feel that this definitely qualifies enough to be posted weekly (at minimum)
u/None [+2] (a day later)
Right, ok, I'm clicking through this link. Be right back. Might need brain-bleach.