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Angel, Valkyrie, Witch, Devil... Chapter 20 Benedict_SC

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http://archiveofourown.org/works/9402014/chapters/25159530

I sort of get what the author was going for in the last paragraph by writing in reverse order, buit it needs a bit of work to make it smother.

But in other words here is Bastion and expected behavior for a PTSD robot.

Comments:

u/Kishoto [+3] (an hour later)

Piggybacking off of my earlier comment...of fucking course Athena was there and Mercy had some sort of backup scenarios set up. I'm an idiot. Considering the competency and forward thinking she's displayed, it's glaringly stupid of me to assume she would have such an obvious vulnerability.

u/Lugnut1206 [+1] (3 days later)

This was mentioned earlier... Chapter 9?

u/Kishoto [+1] (3 days later)

I can easily believe it was. I easily miss things like that, especially with ongoing works :(

u/Lugnut1206 [+1] (3 days later)

I only noticed on a reread... After seeing the latest chapter, so I totally get that.

u/NotACauldronAgent [+2] Probably (an hour later)

It's... Bastion! I do love the chapter titles. Holding down M1 for Bastion is the way he gets POTG, but I thought it was Symmetra at first because she can too. I wonder how long this has been planned because I think this story started before the Bastion and Torbjorn thing was revealed.

Also, Athena appears to be blue team, but oh boy she's scary.

u/pokepotter4 [+2] (a day later)

My wild mass guess is