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[RT] [FF] [WIP] The Optimised Wish Project Chapter 4: The dunce and future king, a dragon ball fanfic
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Author: u/SimoneNonvelodico Dai-Gurren Brigade*
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URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12863641/4/The-Optimised-Wish-Project
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Score: 42
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Created: 2018-04-08T10:57:30
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u/Noumero [+14] Self-Appointed Court Statistician (53 minutes later)
Predictions, under spoilers as requested:
u/Silver_Swift [+2] (a day later)
u/Noumero [+1] Self-Appointed Court Statistician (a day later)
[Microwave ](#s "Would that be a good idea? If there's no signatures, they could use that as their bargaining chip: "you can't kill us if you ever want to find the Dragon Balls". Absence of anything on the radars would confirm their words, and probably look unsettling. But if there's any signature, even a fake one, they could be just not believed and killed before they could prove it. I suppose they could have brought a fake signature in the castle...")
u/Silver_Swift [+1] (a day later)
Edit with a separate microwave (because long spoilers are annoying to read)
u/SimoneNonvelodico [+9] Dai-Gurren Brigade (a minute later)
Chapter 4 is up! Note: in this one we start going a bit into the endgame of this arc, which means you could start piecing together more of what's going on than is said explicitly. If you do, please write any guesses in spoiler tags. Thanks!
u/SkyTroupe [+5] (2 days later)
I was honestly worried about how a Pilaf in a rationalist fiction would work but you managed to make them more competent and still hilarious.
u/None [+3] (a day later)
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u/SimoneNonvelodico [+4] Dai-Gurren Brigade (a day later)
One thing:
u/None [+2] (a day later)
u/SimoneNonvelodico [+2] Dai-Gurren Brigade (a day later)
u/None [+1] (a day later)
u/SimoneNonvelodico [+1] Dai-Gurren Brigade (2 days later)
Hmm, could be about Goku (I'm leaving this out of spoilers since I'm not going to dig into anything special anyway). I'm still trying to find my way around the characters I guess, I have plans and ideas but perhaps can't always make them coherent 100% of the time. My idea there was that it was him following his feral instinct and making a rushed decision (that he does regret immediately afterwards).
Also about magic.
u/None [+1] (3 days later)