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[RT][WIP] Aeromancer - Chapter 5: In the Middle

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u/LieutenantPoly [+5] (20 hours later)

I think Sydria is the one who got Dream Eater to put the geas on Seti. DE never said it was a vivamancer who sent her, so she could have been someone Sydria knows.

u/rhaps0dy4 [+4] (a day later)

So that she could spend some time with her helpless brother and help him?

Shit just got real in this chapter. Seti abandoning his family completely? I suppose the life his family provides is really not what he wants, but still. I feel quite bad for Sydria, Seti has expressed zero gratitude for anything she has done for him.

u/Draconomial [+3] Sunshine Regiment (4 hours later)

It got a bit confusing, who was saying what.

u/ashinator92 [+2] (8 hours later)

^This.

Also, way too much exposition for one chapter :(

u/Nic_Cage_DM [+7] (14 hours later)

I agree with both points, but overall this was still a pretty good chapter.