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[RT][WIP][HSF] Set In Stone: Follower Chapter 21 Rational Stonepunk
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Author: u/Farmerbob1 Level 1 author*
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URL: https://setinstonestory.wordpress.com/2015/06/23/chapter-21/
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Score: 19
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Created: 2015-06-23T07:04:13
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u/Farmerbob1 [+4] Level 1 author*
Well, I just got finished writing 5000 words of conversation between a fairly intelligent borderline Level 1 rational teenage boy and an AI. I'm hoping I didn't botch things too badly :) Please throw fruit and point out problems if I've done terrible things.
u/KarlitoHomes [+4] *
This chapter was SOOO GOOOOD. I'll try to give it a more critical look in morning.
u/gommm [+4] *
I really enjoyed the chapter. The only thing bugging me is that I kept thinking at the beginning of the chapter that Allen is too smart to not think it's Albert talking. But then again, he is a very emotional person (more so than most I'd say) and tends to only really be smart when he is calmed down.
u/traverseda [+2] With dread but cautious optimism*
I like the whole "AI spending sanity to create stuff" thing. It mirrors some of my thoughts on the subject of axiom drift.
u/Zephyr1011 [+2] Potentially Unfriendly Aspiring Divinity*
That was an excellent chapter. I can't think of any particularly obvious mistakes Albert is making, given his goals
u/Atilme [+2] *
I've been following this since it started, and I have to say, this is my favorite chapter so far. I was hoping that this would happen ever since Allen's Ma told him about martial arts. So awesome! Thanks for all the words, and please keep writing!