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[FF] [WIP] [RT] A Rational Character in the Star Wars Universe, Updated
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Author: u/None *
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URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10740793/1/A-Voice-Across-the-Void
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Score: 42
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Created: 2015-07-13T18:50:12
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Comments:
u/INeedAUsernameToo [+5] *
This chapter felt very bitter-sweet. One last dance, before the storm.
u/recursiveAI [+3] *
Very nice. Really enjoying it so far (finished chapter 3)
u/Jace_MacLeod [+2] *
This story seems promising. Out of curiosity, is Nerra based loosely on Kreia from KOTOR II? They both have white hair, brown robes, an affinity for force sight, and a philosophy of viewing the light and dark sides of the Force as two parts of a greater whole. If Nerra starts talking in cryptic, manipulative half-truths, I'm calling shenanigans.
u/abcd_z [+3] *
Nerra backwards is Arren. As in, "Arren Kae". ;)
u/None [+2] *
More than loosely :)
u/trifith [+1] Man plans, god laughs. Like the ant and the grasshopper.*
Ch 1: "his performance seemed to be deteriorate with" should be "his performance seemed to be deteriorating with" Ch 4: " I take it things did not go well Gil?" should be "I take it things did not go well for Gil?"
u/2-4601 [+1] *
In addition:
why put emphasize that one? -> Why emphasise that one?
u/None [+1] *
Thanks, all. Will fix these when I post the next chapter.
u/Sailor_Vulcan [+1] Champion of Justice and Reason*
AWESOME!
u/whywhisperwhy [+1] *
Very much enjoying this, it's already better than a lot of the EU books imo.... Thanks for bringing a little SW back.