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[RT][FF][HF][HSF] Steven Universe fanfic "The World is Your Oyster, the Universe is Your Namesake" Reaches end of book one, start of book two.
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Author: u/mhd-hbd Writes 'The World is Your Oyster, The Universe is Your Namesake'*
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Score: 18
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Created: 2015-10-17T14:02:48
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u/xamueljones [+3] My arch-enemy is entropy*
Minor Nitpick: I was rereading the first chapter and the font's off in this sentence,
“Yes. Meta-', Greek prefix, means about or after, so metacognition’ is to think about thinking. Self-awareness.” If you meant to only use it for part of the sentence where part of it is bolded, then I think you shouldn't include 'so' in it as well. It broke my immersion in the story very abruptly.
u/mhd-hbd [+2] Writes 'The World is Your Oyster, The Universe is Your Namesake'*
I'm terribly sorry, that technical mixup has been remedied accordingly. It turns out my migration from a custom markup language to markdown had a kink right there. Thanks for spotting it.
u/None [+2] *
Welp, I guess I finally have a reason to watch the show
u/rationalidurr [+7] If fighting is sure to result in victory, then you must fight!*
Another reason would be massive foreshadowing/lore solving. There are plenty of secrets revealed in the show by plot, and many of them have foreshadowing in previous episodes. It's sort of like a mystery to be solved. Sort of.
u/None [+1] *
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u/LiteralHeadCannon [+3] *
This is such a stupid attitude towards serialized fiction that, though some number of serialized fiction creators contribute to, is often inaccurate and a terrible thing to assume. I can assure you that the major reveals made thus far on Steven Universe were planned in advance.
u/None [+1] *
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u/LiteralHeadCannon [+2] *
The biggest twist thus far (IMO) was basically hiding in plain sight, and I think a rationalist would have predicted it well in advance; IDK if the fanbase caught it or not since I stay away from the fanbase. A lot of the other "twists" aren't really Shyamalan-esque things so much as gradual plot development and exposition.
u/mhd-hbd [+3] Writes 'The World is Your Oyster, The Universe is Your Namesake'*
u/dysfunctionz [+3] *
Well there's also the fact that it's goddam brilliant.
u/NotAHeroYet [+1] City of Angles Municipal Government*
The lack of conflict is kinda depressing, but otherwise this is enjoyable. Thanks for sharing it, i guess.
u/mhd-hbd [+1] Writes 'The World is Your Oyster, The Universe is Your Namesake'*
Yeah, it starts slow and meandering.