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[RST] Naruto: The Need to Become Stronger, Chapter 4
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Author: u/Sophronius The Need to Become Stronger*
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URL: https://needtobecomestronger.wordpress.com/2016/11/02/chapter-5/
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Score: 9
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Created: 2016-11-02T22:39:13
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u/Red_Navy [+5] *
That capture scene really captured a certain aesthetic, albeit not naruto per say but very ninja-y. +5 points for style
u/Sophronius [+1] The Need to Become Stronger*
This chapter concludes the first half of act 1. I'm very curious to hear how you all liked it so far!
The PDF and Epub versions are available here: https://www.mediafire.com/folder/og9fdufawqfj7/NTBS The story is now also available on fanfiction.net: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12213213/1/The-Need-to-Become-Stronger
u/erasels [+1] *
Is the ffnet version lagging behind on updates?
u/Sophronius [+1] The Need to Become Stronger*
Yes, but I'm posting a new chapter there every day, so it should catch up soon enough.
u/hoja_nasredin [+1] Dai-Gurren Brigade*
I like this.
u/kaukamieli [+1] *
I'd love it if you had "previous" and "next" on top of the text, so I can see it without scrolling. Now I have to search for it, scrolling all the way to the end.
u/tokol [+1] The Greater Good*
Uhm,” said Naruto. “I don’t think so. I mean, the Shadow Clone technique is hard to learn because... Uhm,” -> “Uhm,”
Huge, and with a black overcoat that made him even larger, he wore a grey uniform and a black cap on a bold head. bold -> bald