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[WIP] The New Year's Massacre, Part II.
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Author: u/None *
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Score: 10
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Created: 2017-06-12T11:45:00
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u/narfanator [+1] *
I like the story, but the voice changes from an impartial narrative to a person on the ground, and it's a little weird. It might be as a simple as a change between article (the drones did...) and pronouns (I watched the drones as they....)