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[RT] [FF] [WIP] The Optimised Wish Project Chapter 4: The dunce and future king, a dragon ball fanfic
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Author: u/SimoneNonvelodico Dai-Gurren Brigade*
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URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12863641/4/The-Optimised-Wish-Project
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Score: 42
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Created: 2018-04-08T10:57:30
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u/Noumero [+15] Self-Appointed Court Statistician*
Predictions, under spoilers as requested:
u/Silver_Swift [+2] *
u/Noumero [+1] Self-Appointed Court Statistician*
[Microwave ](#s "Would that be a good idea? If there's no signatures, they could use that as their bargaining chip: "you can't kill us if you ever want to find the Dragon Balls". Absence of anything on the radars would confirm their words, and probably look unsettling. But if there's any signature, even a fake one, they could be just not believed and killed before they could prove it. I suppose they could have brought a fake signature in the castle...")
u/Silver_Swift [+1] *
More microwave! Edit with a separate microwave (because long spoilers are annoying to read)
u/SimoneNonvelodico [+9] Dai-Gurren Brigade*
Chapter 4 is up! Note: in this one we start going a bit into the endgame of this arc, which means you could start piecing together more of what's going on than is said explicitly. If you do, please write any guesses in spoiler tags. Thanks!
u/SkyTroupe [+5] *
I was honestly worried about how a Pilaf in a rationalist fiction would work but you managed to make them more competent and still hilarious.
u/None [+3] *
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u/SimoneNonvelodico [+5] Dai-Gurren Brigade*
One thing: Clarification
u/None [+2] *
Prediction 1 80% Prediction 2 60% Prediction 3 20% Conditional Prediction Just complaining serious complains about chapter 3
u/SimoneNonvelodico [+2] Dai-Gurren Brigade*
About this chapter's complaints Clarification about chapter 3
u/None [+1] *
u/SimoneNonvelodico [+1] Dai-Gurren Brigade*
Hmm, could be about Goku (I'm leaving this out of spoilers since I'm not going to dig into anything special anyway). I'm still trying to find my way around the characters I guess, I have plans and ideas but perhaps can't always make them coherent 100% of the time. My idea there was that it was him following his feral instinct and making a rushed decision (that he does regret immediately afterwards). Also about magic.
u/None [+1] *