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[RT][WIP] Delphic chapter 22: The Hunt
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Author: u/None *
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Score: 30
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Created: 2018-04-23T04:37:47
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u/None [+2] *
Book One is nearly complete. Likely two more regular chapters and an epilogue. For those who are enjoying the story, I'd greatly appreciate further feedback as I'm plotting out the arcs going forward. What elements worked best for you, and what elements strained your credibility? Where would you like me to focus the narrative next - superhero support, crime investigation, Paris, Eutopia? I'll be continuing this narrative, in some form, into the foreseeable future. Let me know what you think.
u/sparr [+3] *
Hector seems pretty smart. I'm constantly surprised he hasn't put more effort into optimizing the use of his powers, different approaches, etc. I bet the folks in this sub could come up with some great strategies on munchkin monday.
u/None [+2] *
I would love to read those ideas. My tentative title for Book Two is "Delphic Incorporated."
u/vaegrim [+2] *
Missed this on my first read-through
He became visible in a toilet stall nearby and perfumed his duties as normal the rest of the day.
u/None [+2] *
Some serial killers like to smell nice.