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[RT][WIP] Gobbos with Guns
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So, after receiving critique on my previous story, The Vasra Journals. I thought I might try something different (haha! No you didn't, you just read over the first four chapters and thought it needed a rewrite but you're too lazy to do a rewrite, so instead you wanted to make something new and avoid your masochistic wish fulfillment! Got you villain! /3rd person).
[So I decided to try something else and apply the criticism I received—Honestly, thanks for that guys](https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20385/gobbos-with-guns/chapter/288148/fray-11)
So far there's only four chapters, and I love criticism, it's what I live for. (That and french toast)
May Papa Nurgle bless us with his holy contagion
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u/aldonius:
Intriguing! RSS-subscribed. -
u/Trips-Over-Tail:
I was expecting a Croc fic.-
u/None:
Okay, I'll bite, what's a croc fic?- u/Trips-Over-Tail:
A fanfic about [Croc](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Croc:_Legend_of_the_Gobbos).
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u/zombieking26:
I like it so far! Though I would recommend injecting some enpathy into your main character. I think a pure psychopathic character might get boring, sooner or later.- u/None:
;) it's actually written in my notes
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u/Sonderjye:
This is quite an interesting start. It makes a lot of sense that there'll be a total lack of compassion if he's been raised in a gobbo village. I second the suggestion for having him grow somewhat out of his upbringing somewhere down the line. I also hope he gets to learn magic.