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A Trans-Dimensional Gate: Chp0 First Knockout (Stargate)[RT][FF]

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• u/sparr:

  Three grammar mistakes in as many sentences. I bailed by the end of the second paragraph.
  

  • u/luminarium:

    I did too.
    

• u/None:

  Anybody wants to volunteer as beta? 
  
  I constantly get complaint from people who bailed out on my stories because of my lack of technical writing chops and poor grammar.
  

  • u/Pakars:

    Currently betaing your first post of the reboot on SB - Going to send it as a PM message when I'm done.
    
    If you like it, I might be up to beta more. It's not like I have more productive things to do while waiting for calls at work. Reading nonfiction can get draining after a while.
    
    Edit: Done, with a pass-through that took around half an hour. Check your PMs on spacebattles. The most 'comma-en'(hue) mistakes are misuse of commas(mostly overuse) and incorrect tense/word choice(Had/have/has, etc.). The early parts of the chapter have a higher incidence of mistakes than the later parts.
    
    Make whatever changes you desire, then strip the color formatting I used.
    

• u/SvalbardCaretaker:

  Whats the Carter Father-Daughter Blackhole Special?
  

  • u/None:

    Recall the episode in which General Carter and his daughter utilized what they learned in *A Matter of Times* to make the local star implode in a supernova.
    
    Presumably, this can be done with any two stargate and a black hole....which is super duper scary.
    

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