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-Online comments are broken. Our open-source Talk tool rethinks how moderation, comment display, and conversation function, creating the opportunity for safer, smarter discussions around your work. [Read more about Talk here.](https://coralproject.net/products/talk.html)
+Online comments are broken. Mozilla's open-source, plugin-based tool Talk rethinks how moderation, comment display, and conversation function online, creating the opportunity for better, smarter discussions designed to fit your needs. [Read more about Talk here.](https://coralproject.net/products/talk.html)
 
 Third party licenses are available via the `/client/3rdpartylicenses.txt`
 endpoint when the server is running with built assets.