diff --git a/src/core/server/locales/en-US/email.ftl b/src/core/server/locales/en-US/email.ftl
index 6873c9617..854b161d3 100644
--- a/src/core/server/locales/en-US/email.ftl
+++ b/src/core/server/locales/en-US/email.ftl
@@ -90,22 +90,19 @@ email-footer-notification =
 
 email-subject-notificationOnReply = Someone has replied to your comment on { $organizationName }
 email-template-notificationOnReply =
-  { $organizationName } - <a data-l10n-name="storyLink">{ $storyTitle }</a><br /><br />
-  { $authorUsername } has replied to your comment: <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink">View comment</a>
+  { $authorUsername } has replied to <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink">the comment</a> you posted on <a data-l10n-name="storyLink">{ $storyTitle }</a>
 
 ## On Featured
 
 email-subject-notificationOnFeatured = One of your comments was featured on { $organizationName }
 email-template-notificationOnFeatured =
-  { $organizationName } - <a data-l10n-name="storyLink">{ $storyTitle }</a><br /><br />
-  A member of our team has selected this comment to be featured for other readers: <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink">View comment</a>
+  A member of our team has featured <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink">the comment</a> you posted on <a data-l10n-name="storyLink">{ $storyTitle }</a>
 
 ## On Staff Reply
 
 email-subject-notificationOnStaffReply = Someone at { $organizationName } has replied to your comment
 email-template-notificationOnStaffReply =
-  { $organizationName } - <a data-l10n-name="storyLink">{ $storyTitle }</a><br /><br/>
-  { $authorUsername } works for { $organizationName } and has replied to your comment: <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink">View comment</a>
+  { $authorUsername } of { $organizationName } has replied to <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink">the comment</a> you posted on <a data-l10n-name="storyLink">{ $storyTitle }</a>
 
 ## On Comment Approved
 
diff --git a/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-featured.html b/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-featured.html
index 4b07eca4a..d5a2e1b07 100644
--- a/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-featured.html
+++ b/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-featured.html
@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
 <div data-l10n-id="email-template-notificationOnFeatured" data-l10n-args="{{ context | dump }}">
-  {{ context.organizationName }} - <a data-l10n-name="storyLink" href="{{ context.storyURL }}">{{ context.storyTitle }}</a><br /><br/>
-  A member of our team has selected this comment to be featured for other readers: <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink" href="{{ context.commentPermalink }}">View comment</a>
+  A member of our team has featured <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink" href="{{ context.commentPermalink }}">the comment </a> you posted on <a data-l10n-name="storyLink" href="{{ context.storyURL }}">{{ context.storyTitle }}</a>
 </div>
diff --git a/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-reply.html b/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-reply.html
index 6426ec062..6d447fc82 100644
--- a/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-reply.html
+++ b/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-reply.html
@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
 <div data-l10n-id="email-template-notificationOnReply" data-l10n-args="{{ context | dump }}">
-  {{ context.organizationName }} - <a data-l10n-name="storyLink" href="{{ context.storyURL }}">{{ context.storyTitle }}</a><br /><br/>
-  {{ context.authorUsername }} has replied to your comment: <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink" href="{{ context.commentPermalink }}">View comment</a>
+  {{ context.authorUsername }} has replied to <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink" href="{{ context.commentPermalink }}">the comment</a> you posted on <a data-l10n-name="storyLink" href="{{ context.storyURL }}">{{ context.storyTitle }}</a>
 </div>
diff --git a/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-staff-reply.html b/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-staff-reply.html
index 88881164d..cc2b0cdf9 100644
--- a/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-staff-reply.html
+++ b/src/core/server/queue/tasks/mailer/templates/notification/partials/on-staff-reply.html
@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
 <div data-l10n-id="email-template-notificationOnStaffReply" data-l10n-args="{{ context | dump }}">
-  {{ context.organizationName }} - <a data-l10n-name="storyLink" href="{{ context.storyURL }}">{{ context.storyTitle }}</a><br /><br/>
-  {{ context.authorUsername }} works for {{ context.organizationName }} and has replied to your comment: <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink" href="{{ context.commentPermalink }}">View comment</a>
+  {{ context.authorUsername }} of {{ context.organizationName }} has replied to <a data-l10n-name="commentPermalink" href="{{ context.commentPermalink }}">the comment</a> you posted on <a data-l10n-name="storyLink" href="{{ context.storyURL }}">{{ context.storyTitle }}</a>
 </div>