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Fixing the tvtropes page

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u/None [+7] (3 hours later)

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u/Vivificient [+5] United Nations Intelligence Taskforce (5 hours later)

That looks way cleaner and more to-the-point than what came before.

The page quote might have more punch if you cut it down to just the first two sentences: "Don't panic. I solemnly swear that there is a logical, foreshadowed, canon-compliant explanation for everything which happens in this chapter."

u/lehyde [+5] Nudist Beach (a day later)

Maybe we should distinguish more strongly between Eliezer's Rationalist Fiction and the fiction that is discussed in this subreddit (namely, all fiction that is stimulating to an aspiring rationalist's mind). The latter is well suited for discussion in a subreddit but I think the former would fit better in the context of tvtropes.

u/DaystarEld [+3] Pokémon Professor (3 hours later)

I think your proposed rewrite is very well done.

u/traverseda [+2] With dread but cautious optimism (3 hours later)

It looks as good as the last version. I don't really know what the problem is. No one's going to cut it for the time being anyway.