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## [RT][WIP][HSF] Set In Stone: Follower Chapter 03 Rational Stonepunk
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* Author: u/Farmerbob1 *Level 1 author**
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* URL: https://setinstonestory.wordpress.com/2015/01/29/chapter-03/
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* Score: 10
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* Created: 2015-01-29T11:53:54
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### Post:
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[Link to content](https://setinstonestory.wordpress.com/2015/01/29/chapter-03/)
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### Comments:
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> **u/Lethalmud** [+1] (4 hours later)
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> [](#s "Hmm, Albert doesn't allow simple fighting but does allow war?") I'm very curious where this is going.
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> Great story so far.
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>> **u/Farmerbob1** [+2] *Level 1 author* (8 hours later)
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>> [Remember that](#s "Albert does not control everything. Humans can even choose to do things that they think are absolutely against what Albert wants, if they are willing to take the risk. He specifically avoids removing free will.")
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>>> **u/Lethalmud** [+1] (8 hours later)
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>>> [I understand. But...](#s "it was clearly him using the countyman to enforce the anti-fighting laws, and now that same countyman comes for the draft.")
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>>>> **u/Farmerbob1** [+2] *Level 1 author* (9 hours later)
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>>>> [True](#s "However, he does so at the behest of a higher ranking individual, the Stateman. The thinking of the Stateman and the agreement of the Countyman should make more sense when we see the content of the letter.")
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>>>>> **u/Lethalmud** [+2] (9 hours later)
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>>>>>
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>>>>> Ok, after the back story I thought albert was going to be some kind of deity for this planet. Super Powerful being in the sky and all that. I was surprised he actually has an active influence on politics / law enforcement.
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>>>>>
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>>>>> Are you planning to keep a schedule of releasing chapters or will the just be released whenever you finish them?
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>>>>>> **u/Farmerbob1** [+2] *Level 1 author* (10 hours later)
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>>>>>> I am... not so good at schedules when writing. It's a safe bet that there will be at least one update per week, but I cannot say what day those updates will fall on.
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>>>>>>> **u/xamueljones** [+1] *My arch-enemy is entropy* (11 hours later)
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>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>> Did you have the first few chapters already written as a proof of concept that you are now posting every two days, or is it because the introduction is easy to write quickly?
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>>>>>>>> **u/Farmerbob1** [+1] *Level 1 author* (12 hours later)
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>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>> No. I have a story outline written, and write and post chapters as I go. I have no prewritten content. I write it, read over it, use the find function to detect a few errors that I KNOW I make, and then post it. If you follow the story and get the email version, it's a first draft. After a few responses, and a couple further read-throughs by me at intervals over time, it becomes a second draft.
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>>>>>> **u/Farmerbob1** [+2] *Level 1 author* (10 hours later)
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>>>>>> [Not Quite](#s "Albert is trying to encourage humanity to develop in a certain direction, while allowing them as much free will as he can. He doesn't step in, except when he's asked to step in. In fact he is not even aware of what is happening until he's asked to help, at which point he's reading everyone he's exposed to like a book, and figuring out far more than any human would. Creating an army isn't necessarily something that Albert would object to. How it is used, might easily be.")
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>> **u/None** [+1] (5 hours later)
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>> Urg. Spoiler tags please.
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>>> **u/Lethalmud** [+1] (5 hours later)
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>>> oh shit, sorry.
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>>>> **u/xamueljones** [+1] *My arch-enemy is entropy* (6 hours later)
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>>>> Considering [Albert's](#s " goals to change humanity into a less aggressive species, the war might be a way for him to weed out the population of the most violent people? Also, I fully expect the war to be very unusual compared to other past wars.")
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> **u/None** [+1] (14 hours later)
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> [Prediction:](#s "It's a shame Marza's going to die. She sounds like a nice girl and we haven't even met her yet.")
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>> **u/xamueljones** [+2] *My arch-enemy is entropy* (15 hours later)
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>> [Are you predicting that](#s " Marza is going to die in the beginning, or will she become a majorly beloved character who gets killed off later to make the readers cry for her like that one other popular rationalist story?")
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>>> **u/None** [+1] (22 hours later)
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>>> Nah, why would the author go around pulling a Whedon? OH RIGHT, because Joss Whedon is popular and rich.
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