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## [RT][WIP][HSF] Set In Stone: Follower Chapter 21 Rational Stonepunk
* Author: u/Farmerbob1 *Level 1 author**
* URL: https://setinstonestory.wordpress.com/2015/06/23/chapter-21/
* Score: 18
* Created: 2015-06-23T07:04:13
### Post:
[Link to content](https://setinstonestory.wordpress.com/2015/06/23/chapter-21/)
### Comments:
> **u/Farmerbob1** [+3] *Level 1 author* (2 minutes later)
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> Well, I just got finished writing 5000 words of conversation between a fairly intelligent borderline Level 1 rational teenage boy and an AI.
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> I'm hoping I didn't botch things too badly :)
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> Please throw fruit and point out problems if I've done terrible things.
>> **u/KarlitoHomes** [+5] (an hour later)
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>> This chapter was SOOO GOOOOD. I'll try to give it a more critical look in morning.
> **u/gommm** [+4] (5 hours later)
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> I really enjoyed the chapter. The only thing bugging me is that I kept thinking at the beginning of the chapter that Allen is too smart to not think it's Albert talking.
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> But then again, he is a very emotional person (more so than most I'd say) and tends to only really be smart when he is calmed down.
> **u/traverseda** [+2] *With dread but cautious optimism* (7 hours later)
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> I like the whole "AI spending sanity to create stuff" thing. It mirrors some of my thoughts on the subject of axiom drift.
> **u/Zephyr1011** [+2] *Potentially Unfriendly Aspiring Divinity* (10 hours later)
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> That was an excellent chapter. I can't think of any particularly obvious mistakes Albert is making, given his goals
> **u/Atilme** [+2] (a day later)
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> I've been following this since it started, and I have to say, this is my favorite chapter so far. I was hoping that this would happen ever since Allen's Ma told him about martial arts. So awesome! Thanks for all the words, and please keep writing!
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