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## [RT][HSF][WIP]Set In Stone: Follower editing continues
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* Author: u/Farmerbob1 *Level 1 author**
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* URL: https://www.reddit.com/r/rational/comments/3uwx81/rthsfwipset_in_stone_follower_editing_continues/
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* Score: 11
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* Created: 2015-11-30T22:25:15
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### Post:
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[A lot has changed](https://betareadersite.wordpress.com/2015/10/17/chapter-1/) - AGAIN.
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I now have 9 chapters edited. The new chapters are smaller than the old chapters, being split by scenes rather than by writing session.
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A lot of fluff has been removed. There is some additional content that was added because, quite simply, I understand Allen and how he connects to the community better now than I did when I started.
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As discussed in a prior thread, the backstory will be replaced with snippets at the beginning of each chapter. (If there's anything specific you want me to touch on, let me know!)
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The three flashbacks have been reorganized. Only one is present in the first nine chapters. The other two will occur elsewhere in act II.
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The second flashback will probably occur soon, while Allen is in town, maybe after he meets Rikard (now Bernard)
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The third flashback is actually quite potent as a mirror moment, even though it's a flashback. I'll probably use it in the middle of Act II somewhere.
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### Comments:
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> **u/imuli** [+2] *Seeker* (a day later)
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> Intriguing story! I'll note that milkweed, while not much of a food crop (though pickled milkweed buds are yummy), would likely be harvested for both latex and fluff, and not deemed a weed.
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>> **u/Farmerbob1** [+1] *Level 1 author* (a day later)
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>> Hrm, thank you for that, I wasn't aware of milkweed's potential as a viable crop. However, in a cornfield, it would be treated as a weed.
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> **u/Gofarman** [+2] (a day later)
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> I read this as it first came out, excellent characters and world building. I hope you eventually go further although I totally get your reasoning for writing "book" length stories. (We've been spoiled with fics like worm and hpmor)
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