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[RT, FF] Rules of Wishing (Disney's Aladdin fanfic), Chapter 4
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Author: u/DRMacIver *
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URL: http://archiveofourown.org/works/4637439/chapters/12739820
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Score: 59
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Created: 2015-12-24T16:31:21
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u/DRMacIver [+14] (28 seconds later)
This isn't the most amazing chapter, but I'm attempting to get back on the horse and this is a prerequisite to the next one that I actually want to write.
u/CitrusJ [+13] (6 hours later)
I liked it! I actually had the impression the story had stopped after chapter 3, so glad to see there's more to come
u/DRMacIver [+9] (16 hours later)
It didn't so much stop as stall. Everyone got so overpowered so fast that I was going "ah shit how can I have a satisfying resolution to this?". I subsequently figured one out but it took a while to get back into writing.
u/None [+1] (a day later)
Please keep it on. I'm loving it thus far.
u/nerdguy1138 [+1] GNU Terry Pratchett (2 days later)
Scene breaks, use them.
Other than that, damn fine work!
u/ArmokGoB [+1] (2 days later)
I loved it.
u/scruiser [+2] CYOA (a day later)
Not as good as the other chapters... but the other chapters were absolutely brilliant, so this chapter is still well above the average for fanfics.
u/chaosmosis [+2] and with strange aeons, even death may die (a day later)
Escalating escalation escalates.
u/DRMacIver [+4] (2 days later)
There's really nowhere to go but up when your starting premise is "competent people get ahold of a genie"
u/JackStargazer [+3] Primordial Apologist (3 days later)
I mean, you could always introduce the person who originally made them make the vast majority of the rules who has been sitting around for a while.
And I mean, if you really want to Escalate...
u/None [+1] (4 days later)
If this were fully fleshed out and 20,000-80,000 words long, this could be one of my favorite rational fics.
On the other hand I hope you'd finish it quickly so I'd get to see the resolution.
So questions:
- How long will this be?
- When are you going to post the next chapter?
u/DRMacIver [+2] (4 days later)
- The next chapter is intended to be the last. There may be an additional epilogue. I am giving some consideration to rewriting the whole thing into a full story instead of a series of scene fragments once I'm done, but am not yet certain I will.
- Hopefully in the next couple of days.
u/Martofunes [+1] (2 months later)
So... How are you these days? any news?