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## [RT, FF] Rules of Wishing (Disney's Aladdin fanfic), Chapter 4
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* Author: u/DRMacIver *
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* URL: http://archiveofourown.org/works/4637439/chapters/12739820
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* Score: 59
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* Created: 2015-12-24T16:31:21
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### Post:
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[Link to content](http://archiveofourown.org/works/4637439/chapters/12739820)
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### Comments:
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> **u/DRMacIver** [+14] (28 seconds later)
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> This isn't the most amazing chapter, but I'm attempting to get back on the horse and this is a prerequisite to the next one that I actually want to write.
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>> **u/CitrusJ** [+13] (6 hours later)
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>> I liked it! I actually had the impression the story had stopped after chapter 3, so glad to see there's more to come
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>>> **u/DRMacIver** [+9] (16 hours later)
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>>> It didn't so much stop as stall. Everyone got so overpowered so fast that I was going "ah shit how can I have a satisfying resolution to this?". I subsequently figured one out but it took a while to get back into writing.
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>>>> **u/None** [+1] (a day later)
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>>>>
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>>>> Please keep it on. I'm loving it thus far.
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>> **u/nerdguy1138** [+1] *GNU Terry Pratchett* (2 days later)
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>> Scene breaks, use them.
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>> Other than that, damn fine work!
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>> **u/ArmokGoB** [+1] (2 days later)
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>> I loved it.
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> **u/scruiser** [+2] *CYOA* (a day later)
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> Not as good as the other chapters... but the other chapters were absolutely brilliant, so this chapter is still well above the average for fanfics.
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> **u/chaosmosis** [+2] *and with strange aeons, even death may die* (a day later)
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> Escalating escalation escalates.
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>> **u/DRMacIver** [+4] (2 days later)
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>> There's really nowhere to go but up when your starting premise is "competent people get ahold of a genie"
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>>> **u/JackStargazer** [+3] *Primordial Apologist* (3 days later)
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>>> I mean, you could always introduce the person who originally made them make the vast majority of the rules who has been sitting around for a while.
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>>> And I mean, if [you really want to Escalate...](https://www.reddit.com/r/respectthreads/comments/2e6at5/respect_skitter/)
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> **u/None** [+1] (4 days later)
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> If this were fully fleshed out and 20,000-80,000 words long, this could be one of my favorite rational fics.
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> On the other hand I hope you'd finish it quickly so I'd get to see the resolution.
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> So questions:
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> 1. How long will this be?
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> 2. When are you going to post the next chapter?
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>> **u/DRMacIver** [+2] (4 days later)
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>> 1. The next chapter is intended to be the last. There may be an additional epilogue. I am giving some consideration to rewriting the whole thing into a full story instead of a series of scene fragments once I'm done, but am not yet certain I will.
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>> 2. Hopefully in the next couple of days.
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>>> **u/Martofunes** [+1] (2 months later)
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>>>
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>>> So... How are you these days? any news?
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