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## Two Bodies, One Mind[HSF][RT][WIP]
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* Author: u/None *
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* URL: https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/two-bodies-one-mind-original.24622/
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* Score: 6
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* Created: 2016-01-04T05:45:09
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### Post:
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[Link to content](https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/two-bodies-one-mind-original.24622/)
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### Comments:
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> **u/None** [+2] (3 minutes later)
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> I don't have a beta or proofreader and I am aware of the many grammar errors lurking beneath, despite the fact that I swept it over one or two times for such errors.
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> It's also scary for me to post something here, even though I post the same damn thing on three different forum, but I don't receive very much feedback. People aren't interested in original content.
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> The story I posted is not all I have written so far, just some that had been edited at least once. (6K posted in that thread versus 11K I have written so far)
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>> **u/Gurkenglas** [+2] (6 hours later)
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>> "Earth to Akiko" <- Gaia.
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>>> **u/None** [+3] (7 hours later)
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>>> It's the name of the planet, but earth is earth.
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>>> I have no intention of replacing phrases with unnecessary phrase or speech.
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>>> It would be like calling tanks barrels instead of just using tanks just because British in a different timeline opted to use 'barrel' to conceal the development of an armored fighting vehicle.
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>>> I will just use tanks. The reader will know what I mean, and I don't have to explain to them that particular bit of trivia, and the readership don't have to memorize that unique piece of terminology.
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>>> Besides, they are not speaking English anyway. Just treat it as a translation convention.
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> **u/Gurkenglas** [+1] (6 hours later)
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> Is this going to be like HPMOR, reeling in the readers with the promise of scientific revolution, then dropping it by the wayside in favor of Plot?
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>> **u/None** [+1] (7 hours later)
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>> Space exploration is the plot or the driving motivations for characters, but it's never quite the only thing that happens.
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