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## [RT-ish][DC] Almost Like Wearing Nothing At All Part 3 The Dreamtime
* Author: u/logic11 *
* URL: http://dreamtime.logic11.com/index.php/2016/06/19/almost-like-wearing-nothing-at-all-part-3/
* Score: 9
* Created: 2016-06-19T11:47:57
### Post:
[Link to content](http://dreamtime.logic11.com/index.php/2016/06/19/almost-like-wearing-nothing-at-all-part-3/)
### Comments:
> **u/logic11** [+2] (45 minutes later)
>
> Tanya's quest continues. Only one more piece to go (it's written, will be published next Sunday).
>
> I was hitting gaming tropes more than anything else in this one.
> **u/GrecklePrime** [+1] (a day later)
>
> Enjoying this very much! Sorry I don't have any good criticism. Looking forward to the last chapter.
>> **u/logic11** [+1] (a day later)
>>
>> Glad you are liking it! Sometimes just getting a positive note is really nice...
> **u/Kishoto** [+1] (2 days later)
>
> I laughed at the agent bit; could totally see some dickish Gamemaster doing that in a D&D campaign.
>
> "Wait, Stan, how the hell did you get that armor? We're like level 7!"
>
> "Oh, my agent hooked me up....what, you guys don't have an agent? Silly halflings...."
> **u/Kishoto** [+1] (2 days later)
>
> Also, just because I feel obligated to say it as this is r/rational; her decision to fight a possibly giant lizard was a bit at odds with the pragmatism she's shown throughout the rest of the story. It's somewhat easy to accept her bikini chainmail; the world convention she lives in literally stops her from getting anything else. But, based on how intelligent she's been, I find it doubtful she'd one on one a lizard larger than herself while blindfolded. Especially considering she doesn't have all that much experience fighting blind.
>
> Just a small nitpick. Still a great read though :)
>> **u/logic11** [+2] (2 days later)
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>> My rationale for that bit is exhaustion, lack of proper nutrition, her not being in a very smart or rational place mentally. That level of ongoing stress can do interesting things to you.
>>> **u/Kishoto** [+1] (3 days later)
>>>
>>> Fair excuse. She has been on that island for weeks after all, and the journey over wasn't all that relaxing either.
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