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[RT][FF] Memoirs of the future Pirate King
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Author: u/MysteryLolznation Dark Flame Master*
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URL: https://www.reddit.com/r/rational/comments/5fjhpo/rtff_memoirs_of_the_future_pirate_king/
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Score: 9
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Created: 2016-11-29T16:16:01
Post:
Thank you so, SO much for the feedback on the prologue. You guys are so amazing. As for chapter 1 and 2 if you haven't read it:
Feedback is appreciated! Even if it's that you absolutely hate the story or that it's actually good, tell me! Feed me with your backs.
Comments:
u/Sailor_Vulcan [+4] Champion of Justice and Reason (an hour later)
wait. is this rational one piece?
u/MysteryLolznation [+3] Dark Flame Master (12 hours later)
My attempt at a rational one piece, at least. I'm still learning, though, so it might get better in later chapters, but we'll see.
u/None [+4] (4 hours later)
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u/MysteryLolznation [+3] Dark Flame Master (12 hours later)
I admire your honesty.
(mild spoiler) Luffy hadn't eaten a devil fruit at that point, though. I felt like making that part clear a bit later.
I felt like having Shanks use his Haki would seem kinda appropriate since he did the same during the canon with the sea king. What I actually do agree with you is that losing his hand function was a REALLY forced aspect that I should probably do away with.
Either way, thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it.