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## [RT][FF] Memoirs of the future Pirate King
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* Author: u/MysteryLolznation *Dark Flame Master**
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* URL: https://www.reddit.com/r/rational/comments/5fjhpo/rtff_memoirs_of_the_future_pirate_king/
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* Score: 9
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* Created: 2016-11-29T16:16:01
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### Post:
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Thank you so, SO much for the feedback on the prologue. You guys are so amazing. As for chapter 1 and 2 if you haven't read it:
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[Chapter 1](https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12250080/2/Memoirs-of-the-future-pirate-king)
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[Chapter 2](https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12250080/3/Memoirs-of-the-future-pirate-king)
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Feedback is appreciated! Even if it's that you absolutely hate the story or that it's actually good, tell me! Feed me with your backs.
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### Comments:
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> **u/Sailor_Vulcan** [+4] *Champion of Justice and Reason* (an hour later)
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> wait. is this rational one piece?
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>> **u/MysteryLolznation** [+3] *Dark Flame Master* (12 hours later)
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>> My attempt at a rational one piece, at least. I'm still learning, though, so it might get better in later chapters, but we'll see.
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> **u/None** [+4] (4 hours later)
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>> **u/MysteryLolznation** [+3] *Dark Flame Master* (12 hours later)
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>> I admire your honesty.
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>> (mild spoiler) Luffy hadn't eaten a devil fruit at that point, though. I felt like making that part clear a bit later.
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>> I felt like having Shanks use his Haki would seem kinda appropriate since he did the same during the canon with the sea king. What I actually do agree with you is that losing his hand function was a REALLY forced aspect that I should probably do away with.
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>> Either way, thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it.
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