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Forty Millenniums of Cultivation, Ch 36-43
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Author: u/BlueSigil *
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URL: https://friendshipispower.wordpress.com/2016/12/25/578/
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Score: 16
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Created: 2016-12-26T05:12:54
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u/torac [+4] (8 hours later)
I’ll keep editing this, as I read along.
The translator reads these, right? Didn’t go through all of the chapters yet.
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experty
expert
emmited
emitted
She unperterbed about the trace of blood
was // unperturbed
She had to breath in
breathe
A few experts in her class had went
had gone
I’m was completely surpressed
I was
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he person whom’s knees he broke a month ago!
whose
These three students all witness Li Yao finish off Zhao Liang
witnessed
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Li Yao was had no interest
Li Yao had no interest
esquisite
exquisite
contribbute
contribute
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the golden oean
ocean
cruizing lazily
cruising
suddnely
suddenly
In a blink of an eye
the blink
the blood gaping wound
bloody??
geiser
geyser
spouted a hundred of meters into the air
"a hundred meters" or "hundreds of meters"
will always of its limits
always have its
The memories of Ou Yezi, were undoubtably, a precious treasure trove equivalent to the wealth of an entire nation.
Commas are wrong.
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rich and power parents powerful
pushing me on the bed
probably "onto" or "down on"
there was those who were cultivated in the path of demons
there were // who cultivated
The second type, is the ‘admin-type’ of Cultivators
superfluous comma
Being able to level a mountain with a single explosive fist, is not representative of the ability to become a capable guild leader.
wrong comma
The admin-type cultivator, really does have its own value for existence.
comma
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there were several dozen terrifying gigantic maelstrom
maelstroms
twisted archipelagos, long and twisted
twisted islands were twisted? (suggestions: malformed, distorted, crooked, misshapen)
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nobody really took the Federation for a real nation
"considered the Federation a real nation" (only a stylistic change)
the nine cultivation guilds established loosely an organization
"loosely established" or "established an organization loosely"
Ping Yuantao, and a bunch of other youths, entered together into cultivator guilds.
"entered into cultivator guilds together" seems more natural
the commas are unneeded
Everytime
Every time
u/Turniper [+3] (10 hours later)
There's a note on chapter 36, apparently these haven't been edited yet. The editor is sick and the translator just decided to post them anyway and let him edit them later.
u/torac [+1] (14 hours later)
Didn’t see that. Thanks for pointing it out.
u/strivon [+4] (13 hours later)
got it
u/torac [+1] (14 hours later)
Thanks.
u/None [+2] (9 hours later)
If they do they should know the page that lists all chapters is broken. Hasn't been updated since 34.
u/strivon [+3] (13 hours later)
fixed
u/Turniper [+2] (10 hours later)
Yeah, I kept checking for new chapters and being disappointed because I would just look at that page.