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## Forty Millenniums of Cultivation, Ch 36-43
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* Author: u/BlueSigil *
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* URL: https://friendshipispower.wordpress.com/2016/12/25/578/
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* Score: 16
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* Created: 2016-12-26T05:12:54
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### Post:
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[Link to content](https://friendshipispower.wordpress.com/2016/12/25/578/)
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### Comments:
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> **u/torac** [+4] (8 hours later)
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> I’ll keep editing this, as I read along.
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> ---
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> The translator reads these, right? Didn’t go through all of the chapters yet.
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> **36**
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> >experty
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> expert
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> >emmited
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> emitted
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> >She unperterbed about the trace of blood
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> was // unperturbed
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> >She had to breath in
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> breathe
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> > A few experts in her class had went
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> had gone
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> >I’m was completely surpressed
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> I was
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> **37**
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> >he person whom’s knees he broke a month ago!
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> whose
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> >These three students all witness Li Yao finish off Zhao Liang
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> witnessed
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> **38**
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> >Li Yao was had no interest
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> Li Yao had no interest
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> >esquisite
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> exquisite
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> >contribbute
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> contribute
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> **39**
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> >the golden oean
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> ocean
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> > cruizing lazily
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> cruising
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> >suddnely
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> suddenly
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> >In a blink of an eye
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> the blink
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> >the blood gaping wound
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> bloody??
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> >geiser
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> geyser
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> >spouted a hundred of meters into the air
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> "a hundred meters" or "hundreds of meters"
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> >will always of its limits
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> always have its
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> >The memories of Ou Yezi, were undoubtably, a precious treasure trove equivalent to the wealth of an entire nation.
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> Commas are wrong.
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> **40**
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> >rich and power parents
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> powerful
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> >pushing me on the bed
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> probably "onto" or "down on"
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> >there was those who were cultivated in the path of demons
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> there were // who cultivated
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> >The second type, is the ‘admin-type’ of Cultivators
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> superfluous comma
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> >Being able to level a mountain with a single explosive fist, is not representative of the ability to become a capable guild leader.
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> wrong comma
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> >The admin-type cultivator, really does have its own value for existence.
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> comma
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> **41**
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> >there were several dozen terrifying gigantic maelstrom
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> maelstroms
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> >twisted archipelagos, long and twisted
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> twisted islands were twisted? (suggestions: malformed, distorted, crooked, misshapen)
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> **43**
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> >nobody really took the Federation for a real nation
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> "considered the Federation a real nation" (only a stylistic change)
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> > the nine cultivation guilds established loosely an organization
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> "loosely established" or "established an organization loosely"
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> >Ping Yuantao, and a bunch of other youths, entered together into cultivator guilds.
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> "entered into cultivator guilds together" seems more natural
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> the commas are unneeded
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> >Everytime
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> Every time
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>> **u/Turniper** [+3] (10 hours later)
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>> There's a note on chapter 36, apparently these haven't been edited yet. The editor is sick and the translator just decided to post them anyway and let him edit them later.
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>>> **u/torac** [+1] (14 hours later)
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>>>
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>>> Didn’t see that. Thanks for pointing it out.
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>> **u/strivon** [+4] (13 hours later)
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>> got it
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>>> **u/torac** [+1] (14 hours later)
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>>>
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>>> Thanks.
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>> **u/None** [+2] (9 hours later)
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>> If they do they should know the page that lists all chapters is broken. Hasn't been updated since 34.
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>>> **u/strivon** [+3] (13 hours later)
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>>>
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>>> fixed
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>>> **u/Turniper** [+2] (10 hours later)
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>>>
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>>> Yeah, I kept checking for new chapters and being disappointed because I would just look at that page.
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