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## Heroes Save the World, ch. 41: Hannah Johnson
* Author: u/callmebrotherg *now posting as /u/callmesalticidae**
* URL: https://heroessavetheworld.wordpress.com/2017/01/31/sharp-as-sword-blades-ch-2-hannah-johnson/
* Score: 12
* Created: 2017-01-31T07:42:57
### Post:
[Link to content](https://heroessavetheworld.wordpress.com/2017/01/31/sharp-as-sword-blades-ch-2-hannah-johnson/)
### Comments:
> **u/FeepingCreature** [+3] *GCV Literally The Entire Culture* (8 hours later)
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> In case this was unintended: I have no idea what the hell happened there. Of course, I'm bad with names so that might contribute.
>> **u/pixelz** [+3] (14 hours later)
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>> Villain's fingers got cut off to prevent the precog touching him and compromising villain opsec.
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>> Little bit disappointed. I thought the villains were chrono-phantoms that could only inhabit unrealizable futures. A kind of precog nemesis. I guess they could still be timewalkers of some sort.
> **u/eltegid** [+2] (8 hours later)
>
> The end did confuse me. Who attacked who?! Who is dead or hurt? Is it Akvo, or was Akvo doing the hurting?
>> **u/callmebrotherg** [+4] *now posting as /u/callmesalticidae* (11 hours later)
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>> The ending is intended to be unclear because we're in Hannah's head right now and a lot happened, very quickly, so she's as confused as you are.
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>> However, I apparently still messed up, because if the text isn't clear enough on the fact that it's *supposed* to be unclear, and why, then I didn't write it well enough. Sorry about that. >:P
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>> tagging /u/FeepingCreature to avoid double-posting.
>>> **u/FeepingCreature** [+2] *GCV Literally The Entire Culture* (a day later)
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>>> If it's meant to be confusing it's fine; I was just noting it to be safe.
>>> **u/eltegid** [+2] (a day later)
>>>
>>> It's fine, it conveys the fact that a lot of things happened fast and the situation is confusing. I was just noting the fact, like FeepingCreature. The questions were more to start discussion than for you, I think, sorry I got it all mixed up :)
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