1.4 KiB
Broken Blades(a RWBY rationalfic): Chapter 10: Falling Spark [RT, WIP]
-
Author: u/avret SDHS rationalist*
-
Score: 13
-
Created: 2017-08-07T00:08:24
Post:
Comments:
u/Overmind_Slab [+2] (23 hours later)
I saw this and read the whole thing. I'm enjoying it and looking forward to its continuation. Thanks for writing.
u/avret [+1] SDHS rationalist (a day later)
Thanks! Glad to have another reader! Any particular things you like/dislike?
u/Overmind_Slab [+1] (a day later)
I'm not in love with Jaune's semblance but you've claimed there's more to it than meets the eye so I'll withhold judgement for now. I do really like Yangs terrible puns and as long as they don't get used too frequently I think they'll continue to be really funny.
u/avret [+1] SDHS rationalist (a day later)
Yeah, Jaune's semblance is sort of boring for now -- it was originally way more obvious why it was how it was now but a beta nixed some details about initiation. It'll get more interesting as time goes on.
u/Vlorka [+1] (13 days later)
Just dropping in to say that I'm really liking this so far and to keep it coming :) I love the depth of RWBY, and the way you bring bits out could prove to make a really interesting story. Plus 1 from me :)