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## Broken Blades(a RWBY rationalfic): Chapter 10: Falling Spark [RT, WIP]
* Author: u/avret *SDHS rationalist**
* URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12466638/11/Broken-Blades
* Score: 13
* Created: 2017-08-07T00:08:24
### Post:
[Link to content](https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12466638/11/Broken-Blades)
### Comments:
> **u/Overmind_Slab** [+2] (23 hours later)
>
> I saw this and read the whole thing. I'm enjoying it and looking forward to its continuation. Thanks for writing.
>> **u/avret** [+1] *SDHS rationalist* (a day later)
>>
>> Thanks! Glad to have another reader!
>> Any particular things you like/dislike?
>>> **u/Overmind_Slab** [+1] (a day later)
>>>
>>> I'm not in love with Jaune's semblance but you've claimed there's more to it than meets the eye so I'll withhold judgement for now. I do really like Yangs terrible puns and as long as they don't get used too frequently I think they'll continue to be really funny.
>>>> **u/avret** [+1] *SDHS rationalist* (a day later)
>>>>
>>>> Yeah, Jaune's semblance is sort of boring for now -- it was originally way more obvious why it was how it was now but a beta nixed some details about initiation. It'll get more interesting as time goes on.
> **u/Vlorka** [+1] (13 days later)
>
> Just dropping in to say that I'm really liking this so far and to keep it coming :) I love the depth of RWBY, and the way you bring bits out could prove to make a really interesting story. Plus 1 from me :)
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