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## [RT][WIP] Blood, Bone, Breath and Bile - Chapter 2
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* Author: u/VilhalmFeidhlim *
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* URL: https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3326461/2/Blood-Bone-Breath-and-Bile
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* Score: 33
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* Created: 2018-07-07T20:24:56
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### Post:
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[Link to content](https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3326461/2/Blood-Bone-Breath-and-Bile)
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### Comments:
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> **u/sparr** [+1] (2 hours later)
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> high hopes but low expectations for a rationally built world that contains accurate predictions of the future. the munchkin monday thread would have a field day with that.
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> **u/1337_w0n** [+1] (23 hours later)
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> The decision to flesh out the setting and his circumstances is not one that I was expecting. I can appreciate the classic self-absorbed amoral organization that is more concerned about its reputation than its constituates, but I feel like it would be best to yell us more about Aswen first. Of course if you are doing it with purpose, for example never giving him a physical description as a writing tactic, keep going because that might be interesting.
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> I didn’t catch any typos the first go around.
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> **u/MultipartiteMind** [+1] (2 days later)
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> (What connection between keratin and bone?) (I keep thinking it should be Blood ('Water'), Bone ('Earth'), Breath ('Air'), and Brain ('Fire').)
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