scrape_r_rational/data/cache/9k4arl.md

## [RT][WIP] Gobbos with Guns

### Post:

So, after receiving critique on my previous story, *The Vasra Journals*.  I thought I might try something different (haha! No you didn't, you just read over the first four chapters and thought it needed a rewrite but you're too lazy to do a rewrite, so instead you wanted to make something new and avoid your masochistic wish fulfillment! Got you villain! /3rd person).

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\[So I decided to try something else and apply the criticism I received—Honestly, thanks for that guys\]([https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20385/gobbos-with-guns/chapter/288148/fray-11](https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20385/gobbos-with-guns/chapter/288148/fray-11))

So far there's only four chapters, and I love criticism, it's what I live for. (That and french toast)

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May Papa Nurgle bless us with his holy contagion

### Comments:

- u/aldonius:
  ```
  Intriguing! RSS-subscribed.
  ```

- u/Trips-Over-Tail:
  ```
  I was expecting a Croc fic.
  ```

  - u/None:
    ```
    Okay, I'll bite, what's a croc fic?
    ```

    - u/Trips-Over-Tail:
      ```
      A fanfic about [Croc](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Croc:_Legend_of_the_Gobbos).
      ```

- u/zombieking26:
  ```
  I like it so far! Though I would recommend injecting some enpathy into your main character. I think a pure psychopathic character might get boring, sooner or later.
  ```

  - u/None:
    ```
    ;)

    it's actually written in my notes
    ```

- u/Sonderjye:
  ```
  This is quite an interesting start. It makes a lot of sense that there'll be a total lack of compassion if he's been raised in a gobbo village. I second the suggestion for having him grow somewhat out of his upbringing somewhere down the line.   
  I also hope he gets to learn magic.
  ```

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