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[FF] [WIP] [RT] A Rational Character in the Star Wars Universe, Updated
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Author: u/None *
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URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10740793/1/A-Voice-Across-the-Void
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Score: 42
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Created: 2015-07-13T18:50:12
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u/INeedAUsernameToo [+3] (3 hours later)
This chapter felt very bitter-sweet. One last dance, before the storm.
u/recursiveAI [+3] (4 hours later)
Very nice. Really enjoying it so far (finished chapter 3)
u/Jace_MacLeod [+2] (15 hours later)
This story seems promising. Out of curiosity, is Nerra based loosely on Kreia from KOTOR II? They both have white hair, brown robes, an affinity for force sight, and a philosophy of viewing the light and dark sides of the Force as two parts of a greater whole. If Nerra starts talking in cryptic, manipulative half-truths, I'm calling shenanigans.
u/abcd_z [+3] (5 months later)
Nerra backwards is Arren. As in, "Arren Kae". ;)
u/None [+2] (22 hours later)
More than loosely :)
u/trifith [+1] Man plans, god laughs. Like the ant and the grasshopper. (43 minutes later)
Ch 1: "his performance seemed to be deteriorate with" should be "his performance seemed to be deteriorating with"
Ch 4: " I take it things did not go well Gil?" should be "I take it things did not go well for Gil?"
u/2-4601 [+1] (an hour later)
In addition:
why put emphasize that one?
-> Why emphasise that one?
u/None [+1] (7 hours later)
Thanks, all. Will fix these when I post the next chapter.
u/Sailor_Vulcan [+1] Champion of Justice and Reason (5 hours later)
AWESOME!
u/whywhisperwhy [+1] (6 hours later)
Very much enjoying this, it's already better than a lot of the EU books imo.... Thanks for bringing a little SW back.