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## [FF] [WIP] [RT] A Rational Character in the Star Wars Universe, Updated
* Author: u/None *
* URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10740793/1/A-Voice-Across-the-Void
* Score: 42
* Created: 2015-07-13T18:50:12
### Post:
[Link to content](https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10740793/1/A-Voice-Across-the-Void)
### Comments:
> **u/INeedAUsernameToo** [+3] (3 hours later)
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> This chapter felt very bitter-sweet. One last dance, before the storm.
> **u/recursiveAI** [+3] (4 hours later)
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> Very nice. Really enjoying it so far (finished chapter 3)
> **u/Jace_MacLeod** [+2] (15 hours later)
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> This story seems promising. Out of curiosity, is Nerra based loosely on Kreia from KOTOR II? They both have white hair, brown robes, an affinity for force sight, and a philosophy of viewing the light and dark sides of the Force as two parts of a greater whole. If Nerra starts talking in cryptic, manipulative half-truths, I'm calling shenanigans.
>> **u/abcd_z** [+3] (5 months later)
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>> Nerra backwards is Arren. As in, "[Arren Kae](http://lparchive.org/Knights-of-the-Old-Republic-II/Update%2058/)". ;)
>> **u/None** [+2] (22 hours later)
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>> More than loosely :)
> **u/trifith** [+1] *Man plans, god laughs. Like the ant and the grasshopper.* (43 minutes later)
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> Ch 1: "his performance seemed to be deteriorate with" should be "his performance seemed to be deteriorating with"
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> Ch 4: " I take it things did not go well Gil?" should be "I take it things did not go well for Gil?"
>> **u/2-4601** [+1] (an hour later)
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>> In addition:
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>> >why put emphasize that one?
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>> -> Why emphasise that one?
>>> **u/None** [+1] (7 hours later)
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>>> Thanks, all. Will fix these when I post the next chapter.
> **u/Sailor_Vulcan** [+1] *Champion of Justice and Reason* (5 hours later)
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> AWESOME!
> **u/whywhisperwhy** [+1] (6 hours later)
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> Very much enjoying this, it's already better than a lot of the EU books imo.... Thanks for bringing a little SW back.
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