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## Chapter 2- Draco Outpost – Sufficiently Analyzed Magic [RST] [WIP]
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* Author: u/None *
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* URL:
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* Score: 10
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* Created: 2017-08-05T15:35:25
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### Post:
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### Comments:
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> **u/Gigapode** [+4] (12 hours later)
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> What is this please?
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>> **u/jldew** [+1] (22 hours later)
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>> This is a story about a semi-transhuman mankind that has reached to the stars using technomagery and applied phlebotonium. They might have had some alien interference along the way.
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> **u/jldew** [+1] (29 minutes later)
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> Typo thread :)
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>> **u/wren42** [+1] (2 days later)
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>> >“Unless Pax was a bust,”
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>> >“Twenty minutes,”
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>> use period instead of comma. it's like this in many places where a quotation ends. use a comma only in cases that the sentence continues, such as ' "Ouch," she said. '
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>> >Some new mix of AI and Artificing she thought abomination.
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>> break out "she thought" somehow, either commas, italics, or quotes.
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>> >starfighter’s
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>> no apostrophe for plural.
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>> >These scans are worry.
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>> tense.
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>> >closely cropped haird
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>> typo
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>> >dossier’s
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>> plural, no '
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>> >She has been sent to the best schools. Had graduated the Academy of War
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>> "had" or "has" pick one, not both.
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>> > unknown races battleship.
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>> possessive should use '
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>> >drove a furrow into the prospective colony’s ground.
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>> This one's correct, actually. just wanted to call it out for being right ;)
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>>> **u/jldew** [+1] (2 days later)
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>>> Thanks. I'm on Mobile, but I will Fix Asap.
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